I am NOT looking for an academic piece. I am looking for a marketing piece. I am asking someone to look at my flyer and see if there are words or phrases that can be changed to be either more succinct or more compelling to get the prospect to ACT (Buy my product) What I got was a dissertation. This is NOT academia. This is a piece that is used to solicit business. I EXPECTED the author/writer to take a look at MY words and improve them in the context of the graphic design
My industry is confectionery, but what I was given with was CLOTHING industry which can be seen clearly that writer did not read my assessment brief properly and all she did was just copy and paste from elsewhere. SO BAD. I did not pay so much for such a low quality essay and I can even do it better. Waste my money.
Prof Harvey worked very expediently, she got my paper to me in only a few days. That being said, the essay I received was alright, some grammatical errors, nothing I can’t revise to meet my comfort level when submitting my assignment but when paying for something to be done you might hope for something a little more polished and this was not.